再回首已百年身——托福作文第一练

It has recently been announced that a new restaurant may be built in you neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan ? Why ? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
 
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According to the announcement, which indicate that a restraunt is planed to be located beside my house, all the changes of possibility have been discussed by residents in my communication more than ever.For one thing, some women, including Mrs Wang ,my classmate’s mother, hold the opinion that such plan would contribute to children’s study  because of there would be less noise, for another, however,  a few people such as Mr Li and Mr Wang, both of whom are working in a factory, think they can’t stand the noise if too much people go out for supper. Considering a few factors such as what it is ready to sold  and how long  it plans to being open everyday, I think it is more important to be convince, and I would like to see the restraunt in a short time.
 
Firstly, such project would is helpful for my health. Because A big restraunt beside my house means  the breakfast would be sold just 5 meters away, as a consequence ,I can stay in my bed for 10 minutes longer instead of having breakfast after a 2 kilometers’ walk. What the previous 10 minutes is very important for my health in terms of heavy study. Moreover, the evidence embrace Xiaowang’s energic after a restraunt sets up beside his home. It obviously that the building would receive warm welcome.
 
Secondly, the construction would bring more opptunities for my community and such chances would turn out my advancing in study. As a matter of fact,  the designers should employ workers for their designation, and the local younger seeking job are the very choices because of average salary requirments , which is nearly 50 dollars lower than other places. Moreover, it is  a good news that means there would be 10 less persons wandering around my house and I would study in a quiet environment. After all , quiet evironment is neccesary for thinking my subjects like Mathmatics  .
 
Finally, I think what Mr wang and Mr li should also be considered by government , they are longing for rest quietly for a night as they have finished a 10-hour’s work. However, such problems , I think , can be solved very easily, and it may destruct nothing.
 
All in all, I think the restraunt means my healthy because of breakfast supported,  more opportuninties because of worker employment and improvement of study because less noise. At the same time, if it is constructed by several mean like 0.5 mm  thicker wall  considering prevent the noise from disturbing us , the big restraunt would receive warm welcome. 
 
 
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According to the announcement, which indicate that a restrauntrestaurant  is planedplanned to be located beside my house, all the changes of possibility have been discussed by residents in my communication more than ever. For one thing, some women, including MrsMrs. Wang ,my classmate’s mother, hold the opinion that such plan would contribute to children’s study  because of there would be less noise, for another, however,  a few people such as MrMr. Li and MrMr. Wang, both of whom are working in a factory, think they can’t stand the noise if too much people go out for supper. Considering a few factors such as what it is ready to sold  and how long  it plans to being open everydayevery day, I think it is more important to be convince, and I would like to see the restrauntrestaurant in a short time.

 

Firstly, such project would is helpful for my health. Because A big restrauntrestaurant beside my house means  the breakfast would be sold just 5 meters away, as a consequence ,I can stay in my bed for 10 minutes longer instead of having breakfast after a 2 kilometers’ walk. What the previous 10 minutes is very important for my health in terms of heavy study. Moreover, the evidence embrace Xiaowang’s energicenergy after a restrauntrestraint sets up beside his home. It obviously that the building would receive warm welcome.

 

Secondly, the construction would bring more opptunities opportunities for my community and such chances would turn out my advancing in study. As a matter of fact,  the designers should employ workers for their designation, and the local younger seeking job are the very choices because of average salary requirmentsrequirements , which is nearly 50 dollars lower than other places. Moreover, it is  a good news that means there would be 10 less persons wandering around my house and I would study in a quiet environment. After all , quiet evironmentenvironment is neccesarynecessary for thinking my subjects like MathmaticsMathematics  .

 

Finally, I think what MrMr. wang and MrMr. li should also be considered by government , they are longing for rest quietly for a night as they have finished a 10-hour’s work. However, such problems , I think , can be solved very easily, and it may destruct nothing.

 

All in all, I think the restrauntrestaurant means my healthy because of breakfast supported,  more opportunintiesopportunities because of worker employment and improvement of study because less noise. At the same time, if it is constructed by several mean like 0.5 mm  thicker wall  considering prevent the noise from disturbing us , the big restrauntrestaurant would receive warm welcome. 

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