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You have decided to give several hours of your time each month to improve the community where you live . What is one thing you will do to improve your community? Why? Use specific reasons and details to explain your choice.
 
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Being required to improve our community in certain ways, someones such as  SB, a student in middle school, prefer to take a tend for disabilities every weekend, including purchasing vegetables, collecting some paper like <Easy Knowing>, and so on;Alternatively, LW, SB’s grandfather who has abdicted 1 years ago, would like to invite doctors to hold a lecture concerning to healthy at times. However, I planned to hold a party called "book show" monthly. A large number of books, whose subjects cover healthy, sports, novels and so on,  can be taken away and returned back next week with sepecfic recordings.
 
Firstly, on my stance, basic to enjoing leisure time is knowing unknowing. For example,  LW can know methods with which he successfully prevent himselft from a possible cold after a 3-day’s rain; SB have found a new way in which the complex  mathmetics problem are easy to be solved with 3 steps less; I would learn to how to manage so many books and get a gerenal idea about every subject even I haven’t known it before such as biology , geography and sports , in that I can introduce books for the residents, and what I have done, I think,  would  increase my knowledge. In short,  all can get knowledge from that party and everyone can know unknowing from books.
 
Secondly, when it coming to a budget with less costs , what I choose to do can’t be more approriate and more important. One one hand, the cost of books cost nothing but my collections, the number of which is  300 and it is enough for all 20 residents in my community. On the other hand, either borrowing books nor returning them requires just a little room and Room 202 is the very choic in terms of lacking of attentions, as a consequence, the cost of renting decreases down to nearly 0 except for paying for electric.
 
Finally, I support that it is very important to help disablities and  deliver some professional lectures , otherwise we can also study the specific methods and useful skills related to serving disablities  and knowing which illness, flues, headaches, or others ,  need an immediated lectures worthy up to 50 dollars for once.
 
In conclusion, knowing unkowning improve the knowledge level of my community  ,moreover,  it cost less but values more. At first ,maybe holding such a party is really matters nothing, howbeit, it communicates volumes, whether we concede or not , because the same "book show " in LIUMING’s community has receive warmly welcome by its residents. Consequently, I would like to hold the party and believe in its potential power.
 
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Being required to improve our community in certain ways, someonessome ones such as  SB, a student in middle school, prefer to take a tend for disabilities every weekend, including purchasing vegetables, collecting some paper like <Easy Knowing>, and so on; Alternatively, LW, SB’s grandfather who has abdictedabdicated 1 years ago, would like to invite doctors to hold a lecture concerning to healthy at times. However, I planned to hold a party called "book show" monthly. A large number of books, whose subjects cover healthy, sports, novels and so on,  can be taken away and returned back next week with sepecficspecific recordings.

 

Firstly, on my stance, basic to enjoying leisure time is knowing unknowing. For example,  LW can know methods with which he successfully prevent himselfthimself from a possible cold after a 3-day’s rain; SB have found a new way in which the complex  mathmeticsmathematics problem are easy to be solved with 3 steps less; I would learn to how to manage so many books and get a gerenalgeneral idea about every subject even I haven’t known it before such as biology , geography and sports , in that I can introduce books for the residents, and what I have done, I think,  would  increase my knowledge. In short,  all can get knowledge from that party and everyone can know unknowing from books.

 

Secondly, when it coming to a budget with less costs , what I choose to do can’t be more approriateappropriate and more important. One one hand, the cost of books cost nothing but my collections, the number of which is  300 and it is enough for all 20 residents in my community. On the other hand, either borrowing books nor returning them requires just a little room and Room 202 is the very choicchoice in terms of lacking of attentions, as a consequence, the cost of renting decreases down to nearly 0 except for paying for electric.

 

Finally, I support that it is very important to help disablitiesdisabilities and  deliver some professional lectures , otherwise we can also study the specific methods and useful skills related to serving disablitiesdisabilities  and knowing which illness, flues, headaches, or others ,  need an immediatedimmediate lectures worthy up to 50 dollars for once.

 

In conclusion, knowing unkowningunknowing improve the knowledge level of my community  ,moreover,  it cost less but values more. At first ,maybe holding such a party is really matters nothing, howbeit, it communicates volumes, whether we concede or not , because the same "book show " in LIUMING’s community has receive warmly welcome by its residents. Consequently, I would like to hold the party and believe in its potential power.

 
 

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